
The Mistborn Saga · Era One · Book I · 2006
A half-skaa street thief, a smiling revolutionary, and a heist against a god who has ruled for a thousand years.
Mistborn: The Final Empire (Tor, 17 July 2006) opens the Mistborn Saga in a world where the bad guy has already won. For a thousand years the Lord Ruler has reigned as god-emperor: the sun is red, ash falls from the sky, the plants grow brown, mists cover the land every night, and the skaa labour as slaves under the nobility and the priests of the Steel Ministry. Sanderson started from a single question: “What if the Dark Lord won?”
It is a heist that turns into a revolution. Kelsier, the scarred and relentlessly cheerful Survivor of Hathsin, gathers a crew of thieves to bring the empire down, and finds Vin, a wary sixteen-year-old half-skaa street thief who turns out to be Mistborn. Most of the book belongs to the two of them, with some chapters seen through the eyes of Elend Venture, a bookish young lord; Sanderson counts the fragments of an old logbook that head nearly every chapter as a third viewpoint of their own.
The first book of Era One, followed by The Well of Ascension (2007) and The Hero of Ages (2008), it introduces Allomancy, the art of swallowing metals and “burning” them for power, and most of the cast the first trilogy follows. Twenty years on, it is also the book Apple’s first Mistborn film is adapting.
“Ash fell from the sky.”
So the book begins, on Lord Tresting’s plantation, where skaa in brown smocks work brown crops under a ruddy midday sky while their lord, beneath a parasol, entertains an obligator of the Steel Ministry. This is the Final Empire a thousand years into the Lord Ruler’s reign: a red sun, ashfalls as routine as weather, a mist that comes every night, and skaa treated like cattle. Every skaa head is bowed except one: a straight-backed man looks up, meets Tresting’s eyes, smiles, and is gone. That evening the stranger, his arms heavily scarred, walks into a skaa hovel, old Mennis among those inside, and tells them, “The mist is not what you think. You fear it far too much.” When Tresting’s men take a skaa girl up to the manor, the stranger kills Tresting and every obligator, taskmaster and soldier with him, and burns the house.
In Luthadel, the imperial capital, Vin is a sixteen-year-old half-skaa thief in Camon’s crew, small, wary, and still ruled by the lessons of Reen, the half-brother who raised her: anyone will betray you. Camon is posing as “Lord Jedue” to swindle the Steel Ministry, and Vin’s job is to use her Luck, a knack for nudging moods that she does not know is Allomancy, to keep the obligators from turning him away. In the waiting room sit Kelsier and his old partner Dockson, and when a Steel Inquisitor follows Camon’s party out, Kelsier sets out to deal with it.
Frightened, Vin tries to slip away with her few belongings, among them the earring her mother gave her; Ulef betrays her, and Camon beats her. Then the smiling stranger walks into the den. Kelsier deposes Camon, takes the three thousand boxings the Ministry has just paid him, and tests Vin with a vial of metals. She is Mistborn, able to burn every Allomantic metal where an ordinary Misting burns one. So is Kelsier, the only known survivor of the Lord Ruler’s atium mine, the Pits of Hathsin.
That night his crew gathers: Breeze the Soother, Ham the Thug, the surly Smoker Clubs, Dockson, and Yeden of the skaa rebellion. The job is outrageous: raise a skaa army, set the Great Houses against each other, steal the Lord Ruler’s atium and bring down the Final Empire. Clubs walks out, and comes back. Kelsier shows them the Eleventh Metal, rumoured to be the Lord Ruler’s weakness, then spends the night stealing atium from Keep Venture.
Vin wakes in Clubs’s carpentry shop, the crew’s base, and notices how different a crew is when its members trust each other. She meets Clubs’s nephew Lestibournes and eavesdrops on Kelsier’s brother Marsh. Kelsier catches her and takes her out for her first night of training: a mistcloak, the eight basic metals, and the city wall. Beyond it a mistwraith follows them, and on the road the Terris steward Sazed waits with a carriage. Kelsier offers Vin the three thousand boxings and leave to go; she takes the money and stays, to see how things turn out. At his mansion in Fellise, an hour outside Luthadel, Lord Renoux proposes that she become his young relative, Lady Valette Renoux.
It is late autumn. Vin spars with Kelsier at Allomantic cat-and-mouse, has her hair trimmed and is told not to crop it boyishly short again, and drills her noble cover, while Sazed offers her religion after religion: Trelagism is the fifth, and he knows 562 more. In Luthadel she studies the other metals with the crew’s specialists and watches Kelsier speak to a secret meeting of skaa while Breeze’s Soothers and Rioters work on the crowd. Then the Ministry finds Camon’s old lair. Ulef and Milev are dead there, and Kelsier, searching among the city’s beggars, finds Camon hung from a hook through his mouth, a ritual killing the Ministry reserves for people who misuse Allomancy.
Vin’s first ball is at Keep Venture, seat of the first of the ten Great Houses, a gothic pile lit from outside so that its stained glass blazes into the hall. The nobles see Valette, not Vin. At dinner she glimpses her father across the room, and hiding on the balcony above the dancers she has her first conversation with Elend Venture, the house’s bookish, rumpled heir. Sazed is shocked when he hears.
Vin trails Kelsier along a road set with metal spikes that lets an Allomancer outpace a horse, and he teaches her atium, which shows its burner a few seconds of the future, then takes her into Kredik Shaw, the Lord Ruler’s palace of spires. They fight toward the small stone building the Lord Ruler visits for three hours every three days, and Vin kills for the first time. The Inquisitor Kelsier saw at the Canton waits inside, and two more arrive. Vin snatches up a leather-bound book as a shield, burns atium and breaks free, and the Inquisitor buries an obsidian axe in her side. She flees across the rooftops with the book, and as she blacks out someone gathers her into a protective embrace. It is not Kelsier.
While the crew is rounding on Kelsier for taking her, Sazed walks in with Vin in his arms, having burned through an entire metalmind to make the trip. They feed her pewter to speed her healing, and he stitches her up. The book is written in Khlenni, the language of Khlennium, and Sazed thinks he can translate it.
Vin sleeps for two weeks, in which time Kelsier renames Lestibournes “Spook.” At Fellise she finds Sazed translating in spectacles: he is storing his eyesight in a tinmind, to draw on later. He is a Keeper, and he tells her calmly that every Terris steward is a eunuch. Kelsier tells her about Mare, his dead wife, and lets her go back to the balls.
At Keep Elariel, Elend drops a stack of books on her table; Lady Shan Elariel, his former fiancée and a Soother, summons “Valette”; and Vin skims one of Elend’s books and finds it close to treason. Leaving the party, she watches a soldier casually cut the throat of a skaa kitchen boy who begged a nobleman for a coin.
Kelsier is building the house war, leaving a murdered nobleman in House Tekiel’s garden and, disguised as a lame skaa beggar, selling rumours to Lord Straff Venture himself. Marsh teaches Vin to Seek with bronze. Kelsier visits the caves where Ham is drilling the rebel army, mastering his memories of the Pits to go underground, and secretly uses Allomancy so that a smaller recruit, Demoux, wins a duel against a boastful one, Bilg.
The book Vin saved is a third story running beneath the other two. Nearly every chapter has opened with a passage from it: the logbook of a man the Terris philosophers proclaimed the Hero of Ages, travelling north toward a pulsing Well to defeat something called the Deepness, while a young Terris packman, Rashek, watches him with hatred. The reader is invited to take it for the young Lord Ruler’s own diary.
“Sometimes, I worry that I’m not the hero everyone thinks I am.”
Spook, fifteen, gives Vin a handkerchief, the sign of a serious courtship, and Sazed explains Feruchemy and the Keepers, formed to remember what the Lord Ruler erased. Dockson tells her how, when he was a plantation skaa, a lord took the woman he loved for a night and had her killed in the morning, and Vin wonders about Elend. At the next ball she asks Elend outright whether he has ever slept with a skaa woman. Once, he says: his father made him, at thirteen, and never again. He wants to know how skaa really live, and he gives her his handkerchief too.
Then the skaa army attacks the Holstep Garrison. Kelsier runs for the caves on flared pewter to warn the rest, and Vin follows and learns what “pewter dragging” costs. On the way they find what is left of the army surrounded by the Valtroux Garrison and leave it to its fate; about three quarters of the recruits have died, trusting in Kelsier’s supposed powers. Some two thousand remain at the caves, ready to move thanks to old Mennis from the plantation.
The crew judges the job a failure. From a rented rooftop over the fountain square they watch skaa executed, their blood emptied into the fountain, and Vin recognizes her father below; Kelsier names him: Tevidian, Lord Prelan of the Steel Ministry. Kelsier talks them into going on. Marsh, now inside the Ministry, reports its Soothing stations and that Inquisitors can die of old age, and Vin burns gold for the first time. At Keep Lekal, a pyramid Sanderson modelled on the Luxor in Las Vegas, Elend urges “Valette” to leave the city, and in his own chapters his friend Jastes tells him her carriage left the city empty: she must be a spy.
At the last Venture ball before the war, Valette is frozen out and Elend breaks things off. The gossip Kliss sells Vin a secret: Elend is to be the war’s first casualty. Vin smashes a stained-glass window to get out of the keep, reaches Elend’s room and fights his six assassins, two of them Mistborn, one of whom is Shan Elariel, and kills Shan. Bandaged, her gown in tatters, she bursts into Clubs’s kitchen, and when Kelsier says she should not have saved Elend, she shouts him down.
The house war is under way: Elariel attacks Hasting while Vin and Spook watch from a rooftop. At Marsh’s meeting place Kelsier and Vin find a flayed body and take it for Marsh. Kelsier sends the crew to a backup lair and goes alone to the Pits of Hathsin, where he destroys the crystal formations that grow the atium geodes.
At the next execution Spook and Lord Renoux are among the prisoners in the cages. Kelsier leaps down and fights the Inquisitor who wounded Vin with flying metal, even spinning bars in midair to turn arrows, while Ham brings skaa soldiers, Dockson holds Vin back, and Elend shoves into the fight looking for Valette. When the Inquisitor buries an axe in Renoux’s back and turns on Elend, Kelsier, remembering that Vin loves him, attacks; he pins the Inquisitor’s skull to an overturned cart and cuts off its head with its own axe.
Then the Lord Ruler arrives by carriage, and Kelsier does not run. One of Ham’s Thugs drives a spear clean through the Lord Ruler’s chest, and a second spear follows. The god-emperor walks up to Kelsier with both still in him, exchanges a few words, and kills him with a single backhand blow, then drives one of the spears into Kelsier’s chest and orders his soldiers and Inquisitors to begin killing skaa. Vin leaps down to the body; Ham drags her away.
That night Vin and Sazed watch a skaa man call his neighbours out into the mists, swearing that Kelsier appeared to him hours after his death, and the crew understands at last what Kelsier planned all along: to become a martyr. In his informants’ warehouse they find a hoard of weapons and OreSeur, the kandra who has been playing Lord Renoux, now wearing Kelsier’s bones. He gives Vin atium, a note, the Eleventh Metal and a picture of a flower Mare treasured. Dockson arms the skaa, and Vin swallows her metals, the Eleventh among them, and goes to the palace.
At Kredik Shaw she talks four guards into joining the rebels, disables the Inquisitor Kar, and blinds another with pewter dust and stabs him with a thrown glass dagger. Inside the little building are rugs, furs, a hearth, and an old bald man of about seventy by the fire. She is caught, sees an image she does not understand when she burns the Eleventh Metal, and is knocked out. Forced to burn aluminum, which strips away her metals, she is brought before the Lord Ruler in a throne room walled by one vast circular window of stained-glass mists, where the Inquisitors use her to prove that the Lord Prelan fathered half-skaa children, and murder him. Straff flees Luthadel; Elend stays, sends his soldiers to help hold Keep Lekal, and goes to surrender himself to the skaa.
In the cells a beaten Sazed swallows a hidden pewtermind, snaps his bonds and frees Vin, and Elend, told that Valette is the Lord Ruler’s prisoner, arrives with six guards to rescue her. Vin finds a vial of metals, cuts down the Ministry soldiers, sends Sazed off with Elend, and goes to kill the Lord Ruler. Sanderson calls the chapter her character climax: she chooses to stay with Sazed rather than flee alone, and learns that part of not being abandoned is not abandoning your friends.
At dawn, as the rebellion closes on the palace, Vin crashes in through the stained-glass wall. Her first attack fails, and the Inquisitor Kar pins her. The Lord Ruler summons his other Inquisitors and only Marsh comes, made an Inquisitor himself, having pulled the linchpin spikes from the rest as they slept. He kills Kar the same way, but the Lord Ruler has no spike to pull. The Lord Ruler Pushes on every metal in the room, bares the Feruchemical atium bracelets piercing his upper arms, and rips out her mother’s earring. Then Vin draws on the mists themselves, Pulls the bracers from his arms, and he ages before her eyes. Sazed brings her metals and a plain wooden spear.
“I was your god, even if you couldn’t see it.”
He is Rashek, the packman of the logbook, and the logbook was never his: it belonged to the man the Terris took for their Hero, whom Rashek killed before taking the Well’s power for himself. Vin kills him with the spear; he dies, Sanderson notes, the way Kelsier did, with a spear in the chest.
Afterwards Sazed, Marsh and Vin talk over Rashek’s powers, the making of Inquisitors, the Deepness and the Lord Ruler’s warning; Kelsier has left OreSeur’s contract to Vin. Elend’s speech has held the city together, and he is its king. Vin had meant to turn away from a life with him. Instead she drops through the still-broken skylight into his rooms and embraces him. Ash still falls, the mists still come, and nobody yet knows how to run what is left of an empire.